What to say instead of "Let me know your thoughts"
It is a vague, low-commitment CTA that asks the reader to do the work of figuring out what to do. 'Thoughts' on what, exactly? It creates decision friction, gives no easy yes-or-no path, and converts far worse than a single specific ask. Open-ended closes feel polite but leave the reader with nothing concrete to respond to, so they respond with nothing.
Better alternatives
- Worth a 15-minute call Thursday?direct
- Open to me sending a 2-minute Loom?casual
- Should I send over the one-pager?direct
- Reply 'yes' and I'll share the details.casual
- Does Tuesday or Wednesday work better?direct
- Want me to put together a quick example for Acme?warm
- Would you be open to a brief conversation next week?formal
- Is this even a priority for you right now?direct
When to use it
Replace with one concrete, low-friction ask that can be answered in a word or a single click. Use a yes/no or this-or-that close. Save genuinely open invitations for warm replies and existing relationships, never the first cold touch.
In context
Worth a quick 15 minutes Thursday to see if it fits?
Words get the reply. Deliverability gets the read.
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